My bad, I didn't mean to come off as disrespectful, I was just stating what I saw from my perspective. This article is not easy to read or to follow. I think if you wanted to communicate effectively, which I imagine is the goal of posting said article, you would do some editing. I personally couldn't take my time to read because I was having to work so hard just to understand what was being said. Some punctuation would go a long way. I hope you get paid for this article, but I'll just say, writing that is hard to decipher rarely does well. I hope you have an amazing day as well.
